Heart by heart they lined up on parade
to march together on valentine’s day
beating and beating
they marched away
as crowds gathered
and watched the display
hearts beating two by two
there love so beautiful
it shone right through
the sun stepped back
and marvelled at this display
the warmth of love hearts glowing
on this beautiful parade
love is beautiful you would here them say
this is valentines
when hearts beat together
this our day
when our love shows and glows
beating a path its warmth on display
hearts beating together as one
its time to show your love
and ask for marriage
and propose on this day
it is but one the valentine’s day parade
interesting and lovely..
thankyou very much your comments most appreciated
Such a wonderful and loving poem 🙂 love your writing!
thankyou very much
Simply brilliant!
“hearts beating two by two
there love so beautiful
it shone right through” That made me smile! 🙂
Thankyou it took me along time to get that one wriiten and many attempts appreciated your comment thankyou
lovingly depicted, thank you 🙂
Thankyou glad you enjoyed it
Thank you for visiting my blog and “liking” my poem. I’ve enjoyed looking at your blog. Keep up the writing.
thankyou
Hi! I nominated you for the very inspiring blog award. Because your love for your fiancé, and the poems you write for her really warms my heart. Keep it up! Kudos!
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Hello Aina i have just had a lady musician turn one of my poems into a song which iam going to suprise my wife with on our wedding where for firstime ever i will be singing.
I’m sorry, kevin, i miss this reply. I don’t even know if u guys got wed already. nonetheless, i wish u always the best, key, And God bless always = )
Hello Aina we havent got married yet it happens on july 7th and many thanks to you it appreciated your kinds words life has been hell this last week or so and i have and i havent been well but hopefully things will improve iam practising my suprise for karen still and hoping i can pull it off on the day if i can over come standing up in front of people and perform a song and i havent sang be fore in my life had a couple of lesson i wrote this song expressing my love in my own unique way as romantic jesture you may well see it online as audio file if i get chance to upload it but it major challenge to pull this off.bye for now and take care from kevin sorry i havent written a poems for several months now.
Kev, I hope you’re ok. Life hasn’t been well to me either. But I am trying my best to stay happy, because I can’t let any adversary ruin the beautiful person in me. Anyways, I wish you and Karen the best of everything. July 7th is so close already, so hang in there. For your ultimate happiness is already on its way.
we had a saying in the R A F OUR MOTTO IS per adva ad astra it means rise above the rest and this is what i need to try and do and you should aswell well i do hope the ultimate happiness is on our way for both of us thanks for your words most kind of you hope you overcome your problems too
Ok, Kev. Take care, and I wish you the best!
I have nominated you ! DETAILS ON http://willowdot21.wordpress.com/2012/07/12/2566/ xxxxx
thankyou most kind
very beautiful, a parade of lustful,loving passionate hearts.. 😀
thankyou