The spirit of life and its beautiful journey   27 comments

Whilst  dancing on song and a hymn, singing a prayer

my humble rock you came in to my life

and shared my dreams my hope my dignity



my whispering of sweet nothings

a love a promise a richness to keep

from humble beginnings a story untold

of a journey through life to love and to hold



a moment of sequence a routine  then despair

a turning point black clouds appeared everywhere

a sun briefly try to break through

there is hope gathering from the showers of rain

its moving clouds are parting life

is happy and were smiling again


waters flow birds darting

to and throw on a breeze


life is calm and pleasant once again



the jigsaw the pieces picked and life put together once more

it’s no longer sad or even a bore

packed full of laughter  and fun



has long gone slipped away


the freedom is here

love and emotions life is once beautiful again


worth living with  its beauty, serenity

calmness without any fears


life is worth

going through the journey of tears

the past the present the future and its fears

the cheers its ups and downs

and merry go rounds


part of the making of sweet life and humanity

all because of life fate and destiny

our lord our maker in all its beauty


a journey we take once in our present life

we see each and everyday its short and colourful

along its brightly lit way


as the spirit that lives within us one day will leave

to its freedom and fly away


to a new and unborn womb

awaiting its day of life reborn

some bright new day


to shine so brightly in this life once again


27 responses to “The spirit of life and its beautiful journey

Subscribe to comments with RSS.

  1. Very very nice. Well done.

  2. Wow this is deep and beautiful. Thank you.

  3. very nice – it brought tears to my eyes – which I guess is a good thing 🙂

    • Hello again Sheila oh thats so sweet heres my hanky to wipe the tears away glad you enjoyed the poems thanks for taking the time to read them and your comment is appreciated.I started writing this time last year on 4valentines4words4poetryforyou and it took off quite well so i thought this year i would start a second blog of poetry other one will still be here thanks for taking the time to view and enjoy the poetry.

  4. so deep and inspiring coming from a heart that loves ..i love the line life is worth going through the journey of tears.

  5. Ahh, the beauty that lies in the journey of life… wonderful 😀 I also love the line “life is worth going through the journey of tears”, I thank God for my tears for it’s what made my heart whole ^_^

  6. very touching…Great depth in the words ..they actually make u feel the journey of life..

  7. “life is worth going through the journey of tears”,
    what a beautiful line
    it is isn;t it….
    for tears are the language of the heart I think…
    This was an incredibly touching poem..
    I am so glad you shared it…
    Thank you…
    Take care…

    LadyBlueRose's Thoughts Into Words
    • Yours words are very kind your thoughts are very sweet to thankyou very much for your kindness i write hopeing to make others happy and if i help one person to have a nicer day or to achieve something through my words then i have achieved my goal from these two blogs. nice that someone in england reads my blog iam in england too

      • I’m not in England though I did leave my heart there
        from the moment I stepped unto your world I felt I had
        come home..
        I have dreamed of PendleHill and the other half of my heart
        for as long as I can remember…I didnot know either existed in truth
        until 2010….it has been so many twists and turns but I wouldn’t change a thinkg
        because thorugh all the tears of joy and heartache I know what is possible…
        your poem made me see….feel that possiblity more than ever for some reason…

        Thank you again…
        Take Care…

        LadyBlueRose's Thoughts Into Words
      • pendil hill is where the witches of pendle came from up in lancashire they were very famous. iam glad i make you feel at home .
        from across the oceans and the waves
        the thoughts are caried through a misty haze
        to a land of ancient history with hills and valleys
        full of green
        where romance and poetry has shone right through and many famous person has tread upon these soils too where kings and queens have met their doom this united kindom where your heart lives too

      • I know of the Witches well LOLs….
        Thanks again…!
        I like that thoughts are carried through a misty haze
        to a land of anciet herstory with hills and valleys


        LadyBlueRose's Thoughts Into Words
      • keep smiling and have a lovely day
        as life will be special for you each day
        as poetry is gift come true
        with word you tell a lovely story too

  8. Very deep as the ocean
    Enjoyed this!

  9. Nice !!

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

Shawn L. Bird

Original poetry, commentary, and fiction. All copyrights reserved.


Brett Kristian

Dr. K. L. Register

Just a small town girl who writes about Christian stuff.

I love music

.......When words fail,music speaks......

Beautiful Life with Cancer

Discovering the Gift


Poetic Journey in Personal Discovery

Maverick Mist

Intertwined passions ~

From the Heart of Life

Inspiration and Advice for Life

Rippled Words

a harp unstrung

Erika Fuego

To Love Yourself is your Greatest Revolution.



Seasons and Impressions

and Other Poems by Cynthia Ann Katon-Alfonso

Of Love and Longing

...inspired poetry from rambling thoughts...

Not Just A Blonde

We are "Not Just" who we seem to be on this Earthly plane, but so much more. We are ALL children of a loving God who is calling us home to Love. This blog is dedicated to those of us on that journey together...

Audio SeXXX

Eargasms found here!

Anne's Poetry space

Poetry from the Heart

Elizabeth Melton Parsons


Elle Ever After

My Whereabouts, Words, Walks and Wisdom of sorts.


poems & stories, thoughts about people and places between moments of clarity, or not.

Richard M. Ankers - Storybook

I write because I must

Renee Writes Here

It's okay if you fall down and lose your spark. Just make sure that when you get back up, you rise as the whole damn fire.

Busy Mind Thinking

Wait! What?!


A Young Man From Wales That Writes Poetry......

Viv d' Biggest Dreamer

I will never surrender!!!

Best Romantic Pics

Smile! You’re at The Best Romantic Blog Ever

Kathleen's Writings & Art

Poetry, Art and Photography

A Humanist's perspective

The thoughts of a Secular Humanist

My NightShade

Step into the darkness, Shine.


I have happiness in my heart and a thorn in my soul

Poetry On A Roll

"free-verse" poetry from the soul

Holiday places

Holiday destinations

valeriu dg barbu

©valeriu barbu

Writing in Color

Because Life is More than Black and White

Written Words Never Die

Historical fiction - India


An insight to a heart mind and soul.


Poet of Midnight invites you to read...


Life..feelings ..emotions..inspiration...motivation.. & .spirituality

Poems & People

what if poems could be symphonies, and people their orchestra?

Jenny's Serendipity Art Blog

"The Art of Making Happy Discoveries"

Betty's Verse Of The DAY

Into His Arms I Fall